Narrative discussion with Sir

Following our presentation, our teacher provided constructive feedback and suggestions on our narrative.

He noted that our story lacked a sense of enigma, feeling more like a concluded tale rather than an unfolding mystery. With the main character's death, he questioned what would keep the audience engaged and invested in the rest of the story.

His recommendation was to add a plot twist or continuation after the character's demise, preventing the narrative from ending abruptly and maintaining audience interest.